Queries are difficult. Getting a 50k story into 250 words? One can go crazy writing and rewriting a query. That's why I entered YA Stands's It Takes a Village To Write A Query and was lucky enough to be picked! It was such a good experience and I'm so appreciative of the nine people who read my query and gave me notes. The fact that they took the time to help out was amazing! And if you need query help, go and enter!
So head on over to their blog and tell me what you think of the query for my MS, The Disloyalty of Colors. Any and all advice/suggestions are appreciated!