Here are the rules:
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS.
2. Go to line 7.
3. Copy down the next 7 lines/sentences, and post them as they're written. No cheating.
4. Tag 7 other writers.
1. Go to page 77 of your current MS.
2. Go to line 7.
3. Copy down the next 7 lines/sentences, and post them as they're written. No cheating.
4. Tag 7 other writers.
Cool? Cool. Obligatory pre-ramble: I'm not finished revising, but that's what you get with a WiP.
Sun streamed in through the cracks in the
cave walls, poking my eyes awake. The
rays of light criss-crossed, illuminating different areas of the cave. Dust bunnies danced in the beams, like the
light of a movie projector. I tried to
sit up and instantly regretted it, letting out a soft groan.
"Elle, don't move," Brodie said,
kneeling close to me. "You'll only
make the pain worse."
The cave spun and I slid
back down, trying to focus on something solid like the cave walls. They had little picture-type etchings, like
hieroglyphs, running along the edges of the stone. The rays of sun highlighted various markings,
but with the agonizing pain in my shoulder I couldn't focus.
There you go! Consider yourself tagged!
Ooooo, I want to read more! Raises so many questions--why is she hurt? What are they doing in a cave? Love this!!
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DeleteLOVE it! My favorite line: Dust bunnies danced in the beams, like the light of a movie projector. So good!
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